Neighbors 44 & 45
Chapter "Well. Little Brother from the way you look, I certainly don't want to see the others," Audra said eyeing her bother's black and blue face. Gene had cuts on his lips and one on his right...
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Liv....you are running yourself to the ground...hopefully you will see Gene is there for you and run to his arms instead.....Best send that letter out...how else you going to know his heart is...
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Great writing! You are doing a terrific job revealing the heartbreaking reasons for Liv's feelings and the depth of Gene's pain. How badly these two need to talk honestly to one another! Hurry back.
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I am heart broke . Poor Olivia, so prideful she doesn't know what to do next. And Eugene, wow. Somehow someone has to get him to come to terms with his mistakes. He is digging a grave of anger that...
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Well that's where you are wrong. You being my brother, my friend, and all. That makes it my business," Nick said trying to slow Eugene down. Gene violently shrugged him off. Nick grabbed him again and...
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